Identify the error in the sentence: 'She likes swimming, to jog in the park, and hiking along mountain trails on weekends.'

Answer and explanation

Correct answer: D. faulty parallelism

  1. Step 1: The coordinated series lists three recreational activities: 'swimming' (gerund), 'to jog' (infinitive), and 'hiking' (gerund). Coordinated lists must maintain identical grammatical forms; mixing an infinitive with gerunds violates parallel structure. Answer: faulty parallelism. Why not the others: "dangling modifier in clause" involves an introductory participle phrase that lacks a clear subject; "subject-verb disagreement" mismatches a subject noun phrase and finite verb in number or person; "ambiguous pronoun reference" leaves the reader uncertain about which preceding noun a pronoun replaces.

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